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handful_ofdust ([personal profile] handful_ofdust) wrote2009-05-23 09:41 am

Sun Comes Up, It's Early Mornin'

500 words straight out the gate. I feel remarkably better, probably because of getting at least eight hours of sleep; sort of sick how that's the extreme exception, rather than the rule.

In and between, I also just finished Rob Thurman's Nightlife, a Jim Butcher-by-way-of-Supernatural urban dark fantasy which has some fun world-building, but unfortunately suffers from an early Butcher-esque surfeit of what I like to call "reflexive rimshot syndrome"...ie, really horrible things are happening, and yet our protagonist feels the need to continually crack wise in a truly annoying fashion. This is particularly annoying when said awful things are being done by the protagonist, who spends the latter half of the book possessed. Still, I may check out the sequel, if I can find it for cheap/through the library. As I know some people do.;)

Anyhow...I need to get dressed, eat something, then go off to BodyFlow. But yeah! Good morning, so far.

Amended to add: And--once again, you knew it was coming! At 8,000 words plus, Chapter Nine becomes Chapters Nine and Ten.1. Off to the usual sources. Enjoy.;)
sovay: (Cho Hakkai: intelligence)

[personal profile] sovay 2009-05-23 05:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Enjoy.

Did.

[identity profile] handful-ofdust.livejournal.com 2009-05-23 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Hopin' for more feedback!;)

Aaaand...got it. Yes, it doesn't look too good for those crazy kids, does it (waggles eyebrows)?
Edited 2009-05-23 19:59 (UTC)

[identity profile] alexthai.livejournal.com 2009-05-23 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Interesting!

[identity profile] handful-ofdust.livejournal.com 2009-05-23 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Which part?