It's fine for there to be a POV character. It's an established storytelling methodology. If people don't like Dr Samadi, that's less your fuck-up than theirs. And yeah, you seem to be giving your characters room to grow, which I like--this is an ensemble, right? That's sort of the idea.
Urrrgh, I mean--just let things be what they damn well are, or disengage, you know? It's not that hard. There's more than enough stories to go 'round.
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Date: 2010-04-20 07:38 pm (UTC)Urrrgh, I mean--just let things be what they damn well are, or disengage, you know? It's not that hard. There's more than enough stories to go 'round.