Edit Farr

Finished my initial pass on Chapters One to Four. Cut out 3,639 words. A lot of repetition, as ever; a lot of truly unwieldy, shitty writing, too. And a lot of Morrow blushing, which--yes, my editor is right, that does seem more-than-slightly OOC. At least one instance of something I put in and then forgot about. I'm sure there'll be more of those.

Okay: Food, then on to Chapter Five!